excelent !

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Not bad, not bad at all. I saw this on the newest listing for the manga/digital gallery that I have on my front page and I thought wow there's someone who actually knows what they're doing. No joke. I clicked on it and was not surprised to see it was very well done.

Yes with how she is holding the gun it is a little off perspective, but it is not very noticeable. The outfit seems very well designed and drawn quite well. Her shoulders and arms seem to be right, though I don't normally like thin arms, but that is a preference and not a problem. Her eyes interestingly convey a strong will which I think is something that is hard to do in manga/anime style art.

Anyway, you asked for critiques and I gave them to you. I normally don't grade things any more, but I loved this so much I just have to give you something so here are four stars.


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ZOMG!!! THIS IS WONDERFUL! D: I really love this honestly, the details are great and there isnt anything I see that needs improvement, its tops! +Fav!

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This is incredible, I love the details and her desing. Good job <3

Love that colouring!

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Very impressive!

u said i improved. so did u! XDD the gun looks fine to me, dont worry.=w=

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Woaa !!! Amazing !!! And Realy CUTE !!!

very, very bad ass and pretty! I love it!

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awesome! I love the dress design! ^__^ I want to do fanart of it

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